I've finally gotten started on The Bathilda Project(no that's not its name Isabelle)!

I know, I know, I only started now. But trust me, I'm full of giddy excitement now.

There are some changes to the story. I've made it in the present tense. Here's a sample:

The lock feels heavy in my hands.
I shouldn’t feel so nervous, after all, I’ve stolen before. But this heist is the biggest heist of my life. If I succeeded, I’d be a millionaire. If I succeeded, I’d be able to finish what Jonah started.
He was right. The safe is empty. There isn’t a single wad of cash lying around. Only a blue shoe box. I pick it up and take the lid off. A silver key lies inside. I smirk. This is what I’ve been looking for.

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